Due to progression with change of scenes, I had to refine my original script. Although my original script was informing for the director, cinematographer and editor I still felt as though it was lacking content in terms of what exactly is the character doing in that scene from the face to the feet movement. In the bedroom scene with Megan I decided I wanted to go for less dialogue approach and do various shots of reading/on her phone. Additionally, the time-lapse scene location was definite in the final script instead of being one of many choices in the original script. Furthermore, scenes were taken out such as when Megan storms away because I wanted my message to be very direct to the audience in the most experimental way possible without making pointless scenes. The newest version of the script is more precise and specific about what I want to see in every scene.